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This was very interesting. The objetivity of the descriptitions, the repetitiveness and the variations really add to the meanings and ant feeling, while still feeling moving at times. I don't really understand it, but I enjoyed reading it.

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Thanks for the comment. I'm happy to hear you enjoyed! This was a departure from the norm for me as a writer, and I'm very glad it resonated regardless.